desperation's blind devotion

[florence & fellas]

DESPERATION'S BLIND DEVOTION

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I cherish all the words
All the unspoken moments
Every little look
All the lovely accidents

Your fingers brush my hand
Electricity sent in motion
Racing up my spine
Desperation's blind devotion

I swear that you were looking
I felt it in my veins
I could feel your heart beat
Through the silence that remains

With all this going on around you
It astonishes me still
How you can look so empty
And even that gives me a thrill

Suspended in nostalgia
Those wondrous yesterdays
How did they go so far
Oh so far away?

Your silence keeps me company
Illusions of what was
I was promised forever
By the ghost of your applause

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[Beautiful Dreamer]

*In awe.*

*clings to poem*

I. L. O. V. E. LOVE! this.

It's amazing. x] Quite simply, amazing. Pat yourself on the back, well done! =DDD

[avé]

Woah. *-* Forrey, this is amazing. The title itself is gorgeous, but the rhythm, the way it rhymes, how it flows so nicely... I love it.

[...{cyn}...]

Oh. My. Gosh. *.* Lovelovelove. Especially that last verse. And the title. And the second to last verse. And the first one. And all those splendiferous little verses and words in between.
... I think you get the point.

[florence & fellas]

Aw, thanks everyone! :3